Comment by Ikwig

Whoo-boy, Sev has apparently gone full aberrant, at least in terms of shape. At least he still has his own mind though (can't imagine a real aberrant thinking stuff like "seriously, can I get one freakin mouth instead of ten billion eyes" . . . although if that was what real aberrants thought they would definitely cross that thin line between terror and comedy for me!). Honestly, I'm glad that Xira is there, presumably trying to help, if only because Xira's presence lets us hear Sev's thoughts, and his inner voice is so completely the same as his outer voice that it makes me feel much better!

Also, I agree with Glew: that tear in the eye is a nice touch. I also love the general upset and confusion showing in all of the aberrant eyes; great job showing emotion on something with only eyeballs!

Reply by Shazzbaa

everyone's nervous about having a mindreader around BUT THEN SOMETHING LIKE THIS HAPPENS AND YOU'RE GLAD YOU HAVE ONE

(omg thank you! IT IS... CHALLENGING to make eyes emote with no face for context)

Reply by Heather

My problem would be if I was trying to read a book and my arm was reading at a different pace than me- I'd have two arms fighting about when to turn the page