August 26th, 2013

In all fairness, being suspicious of someone who looks like Jonan but is asking for help is probably a solid policy.

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Comment by Riverfox237

YAY PONIES!
I think you were VERY successful at drawing a pony in a turban, jsyk. =D

Now, on to the page! And for some WEIRD reason, my lengthy comment for last week's page disappeared (maybe I didn't hit send?) so I'll try to reiterate some of that. For last week's page, I mostly commented on how much I liked the random stranger offering Jonan help on the street, I mean COME ON, how many people even notice people they pass on a busy street, much less offer to help? And the last speech bubble was awesome at conveying emotion and tone just by it's shape and word font. Well done. =D

This page! I love the intermittent unsuccessful attempts at interrupting Jonan is attempting via writing. XD Aaaand it looks like the guy kinda figured it out there at the end. All you needed to do was yell through your lips, Jonan! That wasn't so hard, was it?

I love the new guy's receding hairline showing off his runes. And MAN I am jealous of your understanding of pacing and timing, Shazz! This comic continues to be highly enjoyable for your wonderful storytelling abilities. ^^
Btw, I also like how you do the angry head scribble; outlining it like that is a really clever way to make it stand out.

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posted at 12:16pm on August 26th, 2013

Reply by Shazzbaa

Ahhhh gosh thank you very much! *u*

IT'S HARD TO INTERRUPT WHEN PEOPLE DON'T STOP TALKING TO LOOK AT WHAT YOU'RE WRITING GEEZ

Also being a runewriter makes losing your hair way cooler.

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posted at 10:46am on August 27th, 2013

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